I usually don’t like to judge other’s writing so harshly but some of these scene’s really missed the mark. There’s artistic license and then there is a complete lack of –well– just giving a f**k. I’m sure this is what people mean by really trimming the fat in writing. For most of the scenes, if they weren’t a necessary part of the plot, I would have hacked them quick.
My love affair with writing began at a young age. Have you ever read a book and thought up your own plot half way through reading it? That's how I began, at the age of eight, rewriting stories I had already read until one day I came up with something all my own. I like to say my writing has grown with me, adapting to the many places I have been and the experiences I have had. My writing is as varied as my reading list but I am a true romantic at heart. I hope to one day have the patience to write my all time favorite, Historical Romance, but for now I dabble in several sub genres of romance to include Contemporary, Paranormal, and Multiracial.