Feng Shui or Forget About It???

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Ever had that one chapter that was crucial to your plot line but you just couldn’t find the perfect place to put it?  That’s my latest dilemma as a novice writer.  There are about four different places I could put it but they all are somehow off.  Putting it at the beginning makes other chapters seem less powerful.  Sticking it in the middle disrupts the emotional flow. Putting it closer to the end is too far into the story for it to work the way I need it too.  I could just scrap the whole thing ore re-write it, probably the safer and smarter idea, but I like it how it is. I’m tabling it for now but once I’ve gotten the rest of my first draft completed I will definitely come back to it.

 

Bad Sex Award

Bad Sex Award

I usually don’t like to judge other’s writing so harshly but some of these scene’s really missed the mark.  There’s artistic license and then there is a complete lack of –well– just giving a f**k.  I’m sure this is what people mean by really trimming the fat in writing.  For most of the scenes, if they weren’t a necessary part of the plot, I would have hacked them quick.

Inspiration Struck Hard- Writing Dangerously

So I went on a free writing binge for over two days, typing almost non-stop from 9am till almost midnight.  This is a good thing, except it highlighted an issue I never would have thought about if it hadn’t happened to me.   Morning, day three I woke up and the fingers I use on my track pad were starting to form tiny blood blisters.  

When I bought my laptop I liked that the track pad wasn’t as slippery as my previous one, and now I see that maybe that was a good feature to keep. Typing with those fingers was agony and not using them led to many errors.  I guess I better start looking for a kick ass mouse and while I’m healing switch to old school pen and paper.

Slippery Track Pads – Just another thing to consider for those writers looking for the perfect laptop.

Poem: In Memorium

One Less Angel

Hair of Fire

Eyes of Water

Friend of God

Yet purpose unknown

Silently sleeping unaware of the world

Her once rosy cheeks, placid and pale

Missed symptoms of a silent killer

Secrets of a troubled mind

No more pain will she feel

No more smiles will she share

No more laughter will she hear

One less angel on earth

Tragedy for all

A young yet full life gone

A prayer for all who cared

Memories will never fade

On Writing Strong Female Characters

Sometimes what makes us as women “strong” is what some may view as weakness XD

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